site critique

andymoo

http://www.citrustext.co.uk/

comments please

planetsim

It doesnt look to bad. Id say though a few points. Its a bit bright on the eyes (the lime green) the Ringtones links infront of the oranges can barely be seen. Other than that not a bad site

andymoo

Originally posted by planetsim
Its a bit bright on the eyes (the lime green

Yes it is a bit bright but I wanted to give it a nice crisp, bright and zesty feel

Originally posted by planetsim
the Ringtones links infront of the oranges can barely be seen.

The CSS mouseover helps that, as does the link title and status bar though I've taken your comment on board and made the background oranges less prominent.

Originally posted by planetsim
Other than that not a bad site

Thanks for the feedback and help! Appreciated.

Bunkermaster

OK so :

Forced a non existing logo page:
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/operator-logos-168.html
Harharharhar got me

tried fubaring the model:
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/nokia-70i-handset.html
Nicely done 🙂

The 404 is well done although a bit fuckedup when you move a dir down
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/one_dir_down/

Dirs are locked 🙂
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/images/
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/content/
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/content/polyphonic-ringtones-mp3/

Design now:

Not a big fan or the green frame but if you look at my site you'll see i like black and orange (only)

Bit grainy lemon on top left

too many diff greens (doesn't appear like something coherent)

But nice 🙂

andymoo

Forced a non existing logo page:
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/operator-logos-168.html
Harharharhar got me

Cool

tried fubaring the model:
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/nokia-70i-handset.html
Nicely done

Thanks

The 404 is well done although a bit fuckedup when you move a dir down
http://www.citrustext.co.uk/one_dir_down/ [/QUOTE]

Try again now, modified .htacces

Dirs are locked

http://www.citrustext.co.uk/content...-ringtones-mp3/

These go to the index now thanks to a little more .htaccess tweaking

Bit grainy lemon on top left

I'll sort that over the next few days

Not a big fan or the green frame but if you look at my site you'll see i like black and orange (only)

We found from a survey at another site that half the people liked the colour scheme we'd used and half didn't like it so other than using customer selectable style sheets i'm not sure how to please all! 😉

too many diff greens (doesn't appear like something coherent)

i'll get that sorted at the same time as i do the lemons menu, i could do with god like gd library skills really to make all the images dynamic......

But nice

Thanks for the pointers and the nice comment, i kinda like it - just need to fully css and gd it and it should be easy to use it as a base template for other sites..... it never stops once it starts.......

cheers

Bunkermaster

ask mordecai if he still around for pointers on GD he is GD god