Streets of London

shane1090

Thanks to all the people that helped code my game from this board, it is now about 98% complete. I don't know which board i am supposed to post this in (as to post the code would take days, lol) so i'm just posting the website, to get some feedback on whether you think the coding is good, by the feel of the game, if you get my drift. If you want to see the code for any part of it, then just post your part here and i will post it.

www.the-streets-of-london.co.uk

Hope you like it!

andymoo

initial thought "mr nice meets the krays guvvna" +sweet

code crit is for code so in my logic this is the right place to post if you're wanting others eyes to bug check.

i just scored some hash, robbed a hooker, busted a mate out of jail and got busted.

BOOKMARKED

an "i'm over 18" might be called for because of the language / content.

no confirm on login, poor spelling / punctuation but i like and will return soon to destress myself with some light hearted thuggery. how much for a bus trip? ouch

no graphics in game but splash / enters are good. just plain text could be worked on but the original could be modded to put a wml / xhtml front end on it and make it available to mobile phones over wap. i'd link to it on our wap sites.

high score board an idea and back links essential.

good tho

andy - upstanding citizen but on the way to corruption 🙂

shane1090

thanks for your feedback. I am currently going through and looking for spelling mistakes and grammer mistakes (thats the problem with dreamweaver! should correct your grammer and spelling!).

I didn't think at all about the back options, but i will be putting them in as soon as other parts of the site are completed, and i am currently putting an sign that says that there is content for over 18's etc.

Their will be a confirm on login, plus an activation email as soon as i work out how to do it! And their will be some graphics in game as soon as i can get round to doing it, and i wondered if you could expand on your idea of wml/xhtml front end.

blinkk

This is not commenting on PHP but on the color design.
You should make the text stand out a little bit more and have a bigger screen. It is a fun game but it gets annoying having to think to read and scrolling.