I didn't study your code in-depth, but since you already know HTML well, this shouldn't be too complicated for you to follow.
You'll see a line like this in your code (around line 523):
$v56 .= "<textarea name=\"imagedesc\" wrap=\"VIRTUAL\" class=\"formTextArea\">".stripslashes($v53)."</textarea><br>\n";
The HTML portion should already be familiar to you, so I'll focus on what you need to do in PHP. The concatenation operator (which is the .= ) means to add the values to the right of the symbol to what is already in the variable $v56. So, to add another input field for a second line of description like you're asking for, you just need to duplicate the line that copied and pasted for you and insert into below the existing line so they will now look like this:
$v56 .= "<textarea name=\"imagedesc\" wrap=\"VIRTUAL\" class=\"formTextArea\">".stripslashes($v53)."</textarea><br>\n";
$v56 .= "<textarea name=\"imagedesc2\" wrap=\"VIRTUAL\" class=\"formTextArea\">".stripslashes($v53)."</textarea><br>\n";
You may have to check elsewhere in your file for other lines that refer to an image description input field and just repeat what I've told you above. Notice how I named the second image description name as "imagedescription2".